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Keelan Callihan

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PostSubject: OWA Kingdom 05/20 Thoughts   5/21/2018, 11:05 am

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PostSubject: Re: OWA Kingdom 05/20 Thoughts   5/21/2018, 11:47 am

Show Grade: 8/10.

Things I liked:

I - Although i dont know a lot of the characters, the show gave a glimpse into at least some of the relationships/feuds that are going on, as well as building off previous events. Always good when you can come into something thats established and figure out where everything fits from the first event you read, without having to go back to get an idea.

II - The matches themselves each had a purpose and a means to build up specific talents whilst also decently putting over those who lost as well. I enjoy seeing that instead of just having squash after squash of simply burying the loser, though in matches where one party doesnt promo or a storyline is in place, it can work.

III- The overall flow of the show was crisp and easy to sit down and read. I didnt have to go back and make sure i didnt miss anything, so thats a sign you have the formatting down pat. This is actually more important in e-feds than a lot of people acknowledge.

Things i didnt like:

I - Theres probably a reason for this, but having two segments missing does disrupt the flow and makes it feel as if theres a timeskip that needs to be patched up. It didnt affect the show at all, but its a personal peeve of mine. Though circumstances happen and it has to be done sometimes if you want the show up on time.
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PostSubject: Re: OWA Kingdom 05/20 Thoughts   5/21/2018, 8:54 pm

I enjoy the commentary way of writing matches to an extent because it's so wildly different than everything I remember doing back in the days of match writing and roleplaying ten years ago.  Content is great, and there's very little filler, so I dig that about the shows.  The amount of caps lock is a bit grating on my eyes, but I understand the emphasis needed to show the turning points of the match and the Ranallo-esque excitement from the sidelines.  Also my character looked super strong and not a fuckaround, so that's always lovely.  Good stuff.
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PostSubject: Re: OWA Kingdom 05/20 Thoughts   5/22/2018, 12:32 am

Monolith wrote:
I enjoy the commentary way of writing matches to an extent because it's so wildly different than everything I remember doing back in the days of match writing and roleplaying ten years ago.  Content is great, and there's very little filler, so I dig that about the shows.  The amount of caps lock is a bit grating on my eyes, but I understand the emphasis needed to show the turning points of the match and the Ranallo-esque excitement from the sidelines.  Also my character looked super strong and not a fuckaround, so that's always lovely.  Good stuff.
Took me a while to adjust to the commentary tbh --- but now I'm used to it, I don't mind it. Like you, it's my first fed where it's been written in that style too
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PostSubject: Re: OWA Kingdom 05/20 Thoughts   5/22/2018, 11:37 am

Great show! I'm excited about what's being built up so far for Game Over.

Also Sugar Girls seg was top tier! 

10/10 show
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