Olympus 7/6/2018 Feedback

Well the first Olympus to actually be Posted is behind us, and now I would most definitely love to hear all of you guys' thoughts on it. Your opinions and criticisms mean quite a bit more to me than I may let on with my chat behavior, so please anything you have to say at all is appreciated.

I thought it was a very good first show. The opening segment was a bit choppy but got better and better as the show went on. Matches were well done imo. Oh and Hugh Jass..... Greatest npc name ever!

Loved it! Overall the show was really lit. I thought my segment was a bit short and the Koji match had a bunch of grammatical and spelling errors, but the tag match was perfectly booked and I'm very ready to see more.

0 Kenny Drake

10/10. Perfect show!

Seriously, though, this was a very good first show and was well worth the wait. As Gareth said, some grammatical errors, but that can be cleaned up hella easily. All in all, VERY entertaining first show! Well done!

Omg, we legit have a nation of domination like stable here. 10 Black Powah raised fist out of 10. Aria Jaxon still a menace. Hugh Jass is nice and all, but Bob Taylor is the most filthy name I ever had to read. Like mah gawd this headwriter kid is insane, man. You probably can shorten whose talking to just their last name instead of writing it all out. Unless it's 'Moongoose McQueen', then always write that shit out. And I think proper recaps from previous shows will help, like showing what happened in a mini-clip with Aria at Budokai, will add more to the commentary, and the need to paraphrase what happened. Plus, you know, it's copy and pasting, so less work for you. Matches were good. Tag match was the best. Contract signing seemed a bit short for what was to cap off the show though. Go big, and then tell those fans to go home. *cough cough, put Nas through a table* But hey, that's just like....my opinion, dude. Plus CM Nas is like, just the worse. Like to the point, I'd rather face Finn than Nas... Like ugh, they both aggravate me so much, but Nas makes me want to like.... put him through a table or something. What were we talking about again? Oh right, "say hai to you mother for me, Aria." 

Good start, buddy. Little refining and You're set. Ignore the fanboy suggestions.

Pros: Had a consistent pace and flow, highlighted the range of characters well, tag match was fucking awesome and I can't wait to see where this story goes, a concerted effort was made to secure the future of the tag team division (once you've pried this belt from my cold, dead hands).

Cons: Probably could have been a little longer in places, a few segments felt like they ended just as they were getting going. No real new criticisms to add outside of what's already been said though.

A strong (official) first edition of Olympus, Nas. You're gonna be a hell of a head writer moving forward and make this how something special.